First Attempt at Soundtrack Music

[react]

Here's a song I made earlier, it's not finished and I'm just practicing for soundtrack-style music, my inspiration was, imagining Russian soldiers in a film, massive loss of life etc, it's quite slow, and very slow to build up, so bear that in mind on the criticism, but I would like to know what you guys think, and if you have any suggestions? thanks.

[Rokonader]

Just wondering, could you upload it to a site like www.soundcloud.com ? For ease of access and the like?
Mediafire lags up some computers; and is a bit untrustworthy or unreliable.

Thanks

[react]

Okay, done it for ya and removed mediafire link; soundcloud.com/kuryva/slowaction-russianstyle